Very Cool!
The vocal sounds too unprocessed to me, needs eq, delay reverb and more width - sounds too narrow.
The chords and the melodies sound great.
I'm not a fan of that snare and I reckon your drums are too quiet in the mix, the kick gets lost. Otherwise the track sounds cool, definitely some nice ideas in there.
I like it. good remix. you seem to fight for loudness ... try to reduce in exchange for more clean mix and less muddiness. otherwise, nice remix !