DnB looking for some feedback and advice, 3 soundcloud track links attatched

[~ Barker]

Hi,

I would greatly appreciate any feedback or advice. I love drum and bass and would like to get good at making it.

Here's 3 tracks I've made:

https://soundcloud.com/jigsaw-12/rise

https://soundcloud.com/jigsaw-12/shift

https://soundcloud.com/jigsaw-12/la

 

[Cowthief]

Ahh none of the links work, well keep at it XD bring some more tunes back here so we can give them a proper critique

 

[~ Barker]

Bugger. See if these work..

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/barker-7/rain

https://soundcloud.com/barker-7/rise

 

[Cowthief]

Wow, massive massive tunes!! My only criticism is that they're too short man XD

 

[~ Barker]

Well that was unexpected! Thanks!