DnB Looking for a negative approach in criticism.The cleaner the better!

The snare sounds very clean, plasticy imo. I don't know can't define it. It sounds thin. Structure of the song is cool tho with the little jungle breaks and vocal thingy. Maybe you can however switch up the bass with another one after a while. But I would would put your main focus on a better snare :) Keep it up
 
Sounds sick dude! Love the synth and distortion! Vox could use some more FX on. Cool song structure but sometimes the hacking beat is getting on my nerves.. I say this style isn't my cupa tea. Good work bro! :2thumbs:
 
Sounds sick dude! Love the synth and distortion! Vox could use some more FX on. Cool song structure but sometimes the hacking beat is getting on my nerves.. I say this style isn't my cupa tea. Good work bro! :2thumbs:
Hey man thanks f0r the feedback!What exactly do u mean hacking ?i can't understand the expression!I' am sorry for that ,English is not my mother language!
 
The snare sounds very clean, plasticy imo. I don't know can't define it. It sounds thin. Structure of the song is cool tho with the little jungle breaks and vocal thingy. Maybe you can however switch up the bass with another one after a while. But I would would put your main focus on a better snare :) Keep it up
Thanks so much for the feedback bro i appreciate it!I think u might have a point there mate it crossed my mind also but i guess i rested asure of some sounds i already have.I was honestly listening to receptor's rhyno lately thinking that i must have that snare sound !Thank u for your opinion!!!
 
Really like the idea and structure of the tune, as said the snare is lacking abit, Dirt is certainly a good name, the switch up was interesting, but that jumpup bass just doesnt fit the track for me - keep hard at as defo got some individual ideas
 
cool track as it is! maybe slightly bit more of loudness would make perfection :) and maybe snare is already pretty cool, but maybe one more very subtle layer!
THank u for ur opinion which happens to be very good!About the loudness thing i'm not sure man,i try to preserve some dynamics to the track not make it a brick.At least nomine says it's really important for me to do this.I send him an older track in a live feedback a while ago and he suggested to me parallel compression which is done in all my latest tracks and also take it easy with the loudness war cause he couldn't observe any dynamics in my track.That's why i took it down with the limiter bro!
 
THank u for ur opinion which happens to be very good!About the loudness thing i'm not sure man,i try to preserve some dynamics to the track not make it a brick.At least nomine says it's really important for me to do this.I send him an older track in a live feedback a while ago and he suggested to me parallel compression which is done in all my latest tracks and also take it easy with the loudness war cause he couldn't observe any dynamics in my track.That's why i took it down with the limiter bro!
totally agreed about keeping the dynamic than loudness mate! I hate squashing the sound by limiter too.
What I meant was that, human ears are most sensitive to 2kHz to 5kHz, so if you subtly boost those region, it also gains perceived loudness without fucking up the dynamics.

But actually I heard your track again now with better monitors (last night I was listening with headphones), and I think it's loud enough anyway :)

I am also learning about self-mastering, do you do the parallel compression to master track?
I occasionally do the parallel comp to snares, but I never tried it to the master track.
 
I really like this, I agree about the snare after reading the comment. I think it could be EQ'd a bit but... Just a few cents. Good Work!
 
totally agreed about keeping the dynamic than loudness mate! I hate squashing the sound by limiter too.
What I meant was that, human ears are most sensitive to 2kHz to 5kHz, so if you subtly boost those region, it also gains perceived loudness without fucking up the dynamics.

But actually I heard your track again now with better monitors (last night I was listening with headphones), and I think it's loud enough anyway :)

I am also learning about self-mastering, do you do the parallel compression to master track?
I occasionally do the parallel comp to snares, but I never tried it to the master track.
I d0 the parallel cgompression on my drum channels only bro!
I have a channel in which all the drums go to .Als0 the original 0utput channel and u c0mpress 0ne with n0 effects 0n it and b00st s0me frequencies with an eq.That's ab0ut all i d0 but i can d0 it alm0st everywhere u think it lacks dynamics.But u already kn0w that! :)
 
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