LOOK AT MY TUNE ;)

Discussion in 'Production' started by Poo Sandwich, Feb 28, 2010.

  1. Poo Sandwich

    Poo Sandwich .. it tastes like shit.

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  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Cool intro, bass let it down on the drop, and it got repetative pretty quickly after that
     
  3. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    pretty much this... the sub is sweet though... just the lead synth bass is a bit weak (although i like the melody of it)
     
  4. Poo Sandwich

    Poo Sandwich .. it tastes like shit.

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    yeh safe fo your inputs

    it was my second try at fruity loops ;)
     
  5. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    its terrible.
     
  6. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    troll!
     
  7. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    alright ok it was early and my vagina was chaffed from saturdays proceedings. the bass synth has nice charachter to it and the break is sturdy. i suspect thats a sample cd break though. other than that there is not much good about the song in question. i suggest you work out more variations on the drums and the bass. and the strings. if you get a good string arrangement with a fat break and a sub you should have a pretty good tune right there
     
  8. Indigo

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    i don't like your snare , sounds like one from a drum machine ? not a bad thing but its got this sound that sounds very synthetic
    not sure about the drum beat either kinda gets boring , spice it up with some shakers aswell and effects.

    i love your bass though , reminds me of aphrodite abit and the wup wup wup has a nice groove to it.

    you literally have made drum and bass nothing else , got a bass and put some drums on it . needs more layers and ideas to go into your tracks as a whole
     
  9. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    sample is too low and too long aswell imo.
     
  10. d.o.b

    d.o.b I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    Nice intro,simple but good sounding beat,wobble reminds me dillinja production from 1996-1998 era.Sub is pretty good,try to ad more midrange wobble after that one big start wobble....