LOOK AT MY TUNE ;)

[Poo Sandwich]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxDh12MZN0I

comentss

 

[Mr Fletch]

Cool intro, bass let it down on the drop, and it got repetative pretty quickly after that

 

[richie_stix]

Cool intro, bass let it down on the drop, and it got repetative pretty quickly after that

pretty much this... the sub is sweet though... just the lead synth bass is a bit weak (although i like the melody of it)

 

[Poo Sandwich]

yeh safe fo your inputs

it was my second try at fruity loops

 

[logikz]

its terrible.

 

[richie_stix]

its terrible.

troll!

 

[logikz]

alright ok it was early and my vagina was chaffed from saturdays proceedings. the bass synth has nice charachter to it and the break is sturdy. i suspect thats a sample cd break though. other than that there is not much good about the song in question. i suggest you work out more variations on the drums and the bass. and the strings. if you get a good string arrangement with a fat break and a sub you should have a pretty good tune right there

 

[Indigo]

i don't like your snare , sounds like one from a drum machine ? not a bad thing but its got this sound that sounds very synthetic
not sure about the drum beat either kinda gets boring , spice it up with some shakers aswell and effects.

i love your bass though , reminds me of aphrodite abit and the wup wup wup has a nice groove to it.

you literally have made drum and bass nothing else , got a bass and put some drums on it . needs more layers and ideas to go into your tracks as a whole

 

[groelle]

sample is too low and too long aswell imo.

 

[d.o.b]

Nice intro,simple but good sounding beat,wobble reminds me dillinja production from 1996-1998 era.Sub is pretty good,try to ad more midrange wobble after that one big start wobble....