Lockomotive - The Blue Dot

[lockomotive25]

Looking for some constructive Critisism. Track is still very much a W.I.P

Going for a melodic style Liquid DNB sound. Hope yas like it. ENJOY!

https://soundcloud.com/lockomotive%2Flockomotive-the-blue-dot

 

[blend107]

Hey man,
It's a cool idea, though it becomes a little bit static after a while. The kick and snare sound out of place, and theres not enough high frequency elements for me to keep it rolling.
I really like the shuffly breaks in the background though around 2.10. The amen break that comes in round 3 mins is ncie too.

 

[lockomotive25]

Cheers man. As I said its still a W.I.P. I know it is very repettitive at the moment but it still has a lot of work to be done and I will be changing it up. Just wanted to see what the general view was on it and to see if it was worth continuing with. Still needs a lot of E.Q'ing on Kicks and Snares and stuff. Going to leave it for a few weeks then I can approach it with fresh ideas. Cheers for getting back though. If you like the 'shuffly' break I can pass it your way no problem.

 

[Solace]

I was thinking this whole part was and intro? Because there isn't a noticeable bass anywhere..
Agreed to above though, kinda repetitive and long atm. Also try to make your transitions more fluent