DnB little ditty

[ifanmusic]

https://soundcloud.com/ifanmusic%2Flife Just wondering what everyone thought of this little liquid tune. Should turn down the hi-hat a bit probably but just looking for some feedback/ criticism. Cheers guys

 

[Leniz]

Sounds chill af mate!

 

[ifanmusic]

Sounds chill af mate!

haha cheers man

 

[ifanmusic]

Anyone else got any opinions on this?

 

[Dan JJJJJJ]

Really nice Ifan Really like the arrangement and sounds. Vocals fit really well.

Take my thoughts with a pinch of salt due to my crap listening conditions but... For me the kick could have a bit more punch, it sounds a bit flat. Vocals could maybe be just a little bit higher in the mix and I think the hi line that comes in a few times is too loud.

Enjoyed listening to that

 

[ifanmusic]

Really nice Ifan Really like the arrangement and sounds. Vocals fit really well.

Take my thoughts with a pinch of salt due to my crap listening conditions but... For me the kick could have a bit more punch, it sounds a bit flat. Vocals could maybe be just a little bit higher in the mix and I think the hi line that comes in a few times is too loud.

Enjoyed listening to that

Thanks mate. Will take all those into consideration

 

[Mentor & Moore]

Sounds great man! the vocal sounds really nice with the bass & pads! maybe add a little break somewhere in the middle?

https://soundcloud.com/mentorandmoore%2Fas-we-are

 

[ifanmusic]

Sounds great man! the vocal sounds really nice with the bass & pads! maybe add a little break somewhere in the middle?

https://soundcloud.com/mentorandmoore%2Fas-we-are

Yep definitely something I need to do more. Cheers

 

[Focal Shift]

sounds cool, maybe get some more dynamics into that quick hat loop that comes in, normally if i make a hit a lower volume i'll pitch it down a few cents and if i increase the volume pitch it up slightly, gives a more natural sound, for each hit mind

 

[maschinistom]

Love the atmo and sounds ... I also suggest a break for this one, would fit the song. Good work!

 

[El_gato]

Sounds great. Just a bit of volume automation on the HH when it gets louder and done.

 

[ifanmusic]

sounds cool, maybe get some more dynamics into that quick hat loop that comes in, normally if i make a hit a lower volume i'll pitch it down a few cents and if i increase the volume pitch it up slightly, gives a more natural sound, for each hit mind

You know I never thought of that but that makes perfect sense - I'll bear that in mind. Cheers

 

[ifanmusic]

Love the atmo and sounds ... I also suggest a break for this one, would fit the song. Good work!

Sounds great. Just a bit of volume automation on the HH when it gets louder and done.

Cheers guys!

 

[PeriodicDisturbance]

love this.. sounds much more interesting, abstract, obtuse, than what i know to be liquid. epic track, no criticism to offer.

 

[ifanmusic]

love this.. sounds much more interesting, abstract, obtuse, than what i know to be liquid. epic track, no criticism to offer.

wow, thank you very much!

 

[gregorkarbowski]

Good work here only thing imo the drums need a little more punch

 

[IV4]

Not sure if anyone has said it yet, but I really can't hear the vocal. It is totally drowned out by the lead. Not sure if that was the effect you were going for.

 

[ifanmusic]

Good work here only thing imo the drums need a little more punch

I did experiment with using bigger sounding snares but I just thought that little block sound fitted it better. Kick could maybe do with more punch though. Thanks for responding.

Not sure if anyone has said it yet, but I really can't hear the vocal. It is totally drowned out by the lead. Not sure if that was the effect you were going for.

Could maybe be turned up a bit but yeah I was kind of going for the vocals as a texture rather than at the forefront if you know what I mean. Cheers for the response