Liquid WIP Thoughts ?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Breaknz, May 14, 2014.

  1. Breaknz

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    Ez man, random thoughts below:

    lower resonance (or Q) on the filter in the intro.
    really like the change-up when the vocals drop in the intro.
    The 3rd phrase of the intro feels a little long maybe, I think its just the riser in the middle which gives that impression though.
    Snare feels a bit quiet, it lacks presence.
    I'd like to hear more of the vocal in the intro, its a bit cheddar but certainly serves to hype the feel of the song, which I think it needs.
    It could do with some more progression, a change-up, but that all comes with time invested into the track and I certainly think its worth continuing with it.
     
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    Menosance aka OSOI

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    ^^ These two for me as well. Mix is spot though, even the snare to my ears. It does need something else though. Something sounds missing, probably it is some more variation. Overall, it is good and you should continue working on it. It's good :)
     
  4. Breaknz

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    thanks , I shall look into those things :)
     
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    I like it really much, but i find the drums a bit too quiet and the sub bass too dominant, it seems to drown the rest a bit.