Drum & Bass liquid wip, need some help/feedback

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fatkidscantjump, Oct 4, 2013.

  1. Fatkidscantjump

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    hey guys, i would like some feedback on this one.. especially on the vocals. Basically I wanted to make a driving track with an ambiant feel i'm surely expressing myself wrong, what i want to say is that i didnt wanted to have something that stands out like a melody or something. But maybe it is a bit boring ? Also this is like a "dry" mix as I'm planning to add a lot of white noises / fills and cuts on the drums etc..

    but anyways here it is http://soundcloud.com/azoteliquid/wip-liquid/s-eZmqQ

    thanks for listening!
    cheers

    EDIT : here is the "final" version :
     
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  2. Mania

    Mania i fukin wot m8

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    Love it, I think even as it is, you've really hit the nail. Yeah of course it could use maybe a few more elements or change-ups maybe, but i wouldnt go too crazy. Vocals sounds really great, and they work really well behind instead of in front. My only tiny gripe is that the sub has a bit too much harmonics which sound a bit rough under the liquidness.

    Great work!
     
  3. DjCartel

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    sounds good to me man, very atmospheric. vocal fits nicely too! i think a few sweeps and fills/cuts would help a little bit, as the drums to roll on a little bit. thats really nit picking though! great track. i like how the second rop just comes stratight in too
     
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    atmospheric ! thats the word i was looking for ! haha
    thanks for the feedback, will try to polish it :)
     
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    Well done mate, Absolutely love it! The whole atmosphere and vibe sounds perfect. Great use when it comes to the vocals! They add to the whole feel.
     
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    thanks !!
    i think it's finished , updated the post with the final version but i'll link it here too just in case :
     
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    last bump until i let this thread dive into the abysses of this forum :D