Liquid vibe track, own vocals

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JimpaDirt, Jun 2, 2012.

  1. JimpaDirt

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    Me latest piece of music, tell me what you think. The vocals are from me own throat, I aint no singer really but in lack of good samples... :)






    Now when I listen back to it I hear that theres something iffy with the sub so I might need a new bounce on this lol... Theres always something.

    Edit: Uploaded a new version with slightly louder vocals and fixed the thing with the sub. :)
     
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    Not really feeling the bass, but the vox were pretty nice, maybe a bit quiet, even though I guess you're going for a subtle ting here.

    Pretty ballsy using your own voice, man, I have serious issues listening to my own voice on recording!
     
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    Cheers for the feedback mate! Y, I wanted the bass to have a bit more "omhph"- sound to it but I couldn't really get it going so It turned out to be this that I felt fairly comfortable with. :p

    Haha yeah I know that feeling man, it made me go totally nuts on the FX's in the beginning cuz I couldn't bare with it :lol:
     
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    cum cum cum.........

    i like it, pretty bouncy :) but with like an 80s poppy vibe. cool!
     
  5. Meloz

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    Quite like this! I think the bass alone however is not enough, try adding some piano and some strings, fill it out a little (but subtlety) ?
     
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    I agree with meloz

    I like the 80s vibe tho.
     
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    Haha, knew someone was going to mention that! I actually named the audio track for that "cum" :lol:


    Glad y'all dig guys