[LIQUID] Twilight Shadows comment plz!!!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DJ Wizz, Jan 4, 2009.

  1. DJ Wizz

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    Sounding nice mate, liking the breaks. I think the synth needs to be a bit punchier maybe? Keep it up!
     
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    cheers keep it comin mans!
     
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    safe any more?
     
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    bump plz check this!
     
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    the drums in the intro seem a little lacking in definition and umph - the fills really make this apparent as they seem much clearer, after the drop its a big improvement. I like the main pad melody but the lead synth needs a lot more depth and variation it seems far too dry and the second drop just seems to add more confusion - less is more my friend - get a few elements and work on them really filling the frequency range and sounding full. Have a look at the final wav in a frequency analyser and you'll see what I mean - the top is almost not existant. anyways sorry if this came across as harsh - the basics are there you've definitely got potential just need to learn to fill out those frequencies better - then move on to structure.