Liquid track, Strings, Piano and all that shit.

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  1. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Hola! thought i'd post my latest track up on here. The title describes it pretty well imo, hope you like it!



    All feedback is welcome! :)
     
  2. nusphere

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    Yeally nice sounds in this, though I think it needs a hook, I found my mind drifting as I listened. Not sure about the use of white noise on the break down.
     
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    Thanks mate! Yeah, theres no real lead melody or anything.. I couldn't really come up with anything decent but that was my plan from the start :) As for the white noise thingy, I thought it would be a cool idea. Could have been done more smoothly maybe.

    Cheers for taking time and listen!
     
  4. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Sounds a bit 80ish. Cool melody.
     
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    Nice man! bass and little echoey pike sounds are sweet. good work!
     
  7. moonglow359

    moonglow359 I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    cool track it's dying out for some vocals man. maybe put some more delay and reverb on the synths.. love the piano!!!!!!!!!!!! very nice! very chilled. you're good at melodies.

    drums sound a bit too basic for my liking. other than that I quite like it.
     
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    Thanks both of u, appreciate it! Maybe could have spent some more time with the drums actually:)

    Glad u like it!
     
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    Haha, I was listening and picturing the credits for an 80's private investigator tv show, you know, tight jeans, leather jacket, jumping a fence, pulling a gun, convertible, all that.
     
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    Cool song man. I really enjoyed the chords and distant melodies. The Bass sounded really good too.