Drum & Bass Liquid track , Matt & Laurenz - Progress , feedback needed

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Matt&Laurenz, Dec 2, 2012.

  1. Matt&Laurenz

    Matt&Laurenz New Member

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    Hello!
    We're back with a new track, called 'Progress' , we'd like to share it with you guys :) , feedback is appreciated ofcourse!



    Ps: The reason we don't seem to interact with other forumers , is because this is a 'duo-account' , we do check out alot of stuff on here with our private accounts. Cheers!
     
  2. djSing

    djSing Ill-usions

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    I really like the basis of this track, I like the beat, and those rhodes are sweet.

    You need to work on the structure tho and making the drops have a bit more impact.

    After the first 32 the bass is introduced but it never stops, the waveform shows this... and when the drums kick back in again, they lose impact because of this.. the bits without the beat just feel like 'gaps'. Make a section where you can build up the track again for a second drop, taking almost all the elements out and bringing them back in.

    Nice work, if you can use the drumstep bit as part of the second drop which then goes back to dnb, would be more of a surprise to listeners.
     
  3. Freezz

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    great vibe, great atmosphere! did you use any kind of sub? (ps: please feedback my tune as well :) it's a recent topic!)
     
  4. Fatkidscantjump

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    yes yes yes like it a lot, nice vibe.
    everything is really nice about it in my opinion except maybe for the arrangement.. maybe you guys should make more a build-up before the drop or an anti-drop etc
     
  5. Grindlefly

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    Really really sic. Am liking this a lot :)
     
  6. alcaponeuk

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    love this, the drums make it, and the strings with the long attack are insane!!