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melody and musical structure are all there and they are actually really good tbh,
but you just need to work on your sound quality, my particular problem is that snare is not carrying the tune well enough, its very low and muddy and feels disconnected from the drums, work on your drums man! your musical ability is there you just need better sounds
 
i agree, the snare doesn't do justice to this track, should definitely layer it up or change it completely in my opinion, nice stuff otherwise liking what i am hearing.
 
I agree with the above two comments, the track sounds really quiet almost muffled or something
Perhaps you need to work on your mixdown better or use some better monitors or something like that
Adjust some EQ's maybe

Aside from that stuff the track is great
 
i agree with the above comment, agreeing with the other comments. Sick idea for a tune just needz a bit more clarity init doe
 
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