nice one man. well produced.
got a few ideas:
think those hats are a bit too splashy for the rest of the drums (which are crisp btw)
maybe break down the elements and build em up to more - adds abit more spice
or you could bust in to an aprhodite moment and suddenly break into a dirty hard jump up section (sorry im a bit wasted)
i like all the elements - think it could do with a bit more exicitement or maybe just spread the vocals out more - its a bit difficult to follow ( i dont know the song) - not sure when the chorus is coming in if u c wot i mean
im rambling now sorry m8 -
my verdict - chop up the vocals and make them fit your track more - sounds a bit like the track fits them if u c wot i mean ( i dont mean they are out of time cos they arent out of time)
mate, this is drum & bass, i'd take a wasted person's opinion over a sober person any day! cheers for the comments, i will take those into consideration in my next version and hopefully give it the edge it needs.