!!!!LIQUID RE-EDIT!!!! FEEDBACK PLZZ!!!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by djlfusion, Apr 2, 2009.

  1. djlfusion

    djlfusion Member

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    INO IV POSTED THIS TRACK UP TWICE ALREDI BUT I THINK IM NEARLI THER WIV THIS ONE. SO CHECK OUT THE PLAYER 'HIGHS & LOWS' LEAVE FEEDBACK PLZ!

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    ALSO CHECK THE MIXES IN BLOG!!!!
     
  2. D-Tektiv

    D-Tektiv Active Member

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    Tracks comin' along since the last time, nice one..pz
     
  3. thin king

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    The intro shakers/hats don't really work being broken up like that - keep them more flowing - not bad work on the drums sound pretty fat....it needs a proper first drop as it more kinda just starts rather than builds to it - maybe try a break down around the minute mark - alot of tunes do this or have a build. Also I think you have some kind of limiter on the master as every few bars a snare comes through much louder than any other - limiting or any input on the master is risky business unless you really know what your doing like a sound engineer. Not meaning to be harsh matey just a few pointers to consider - a few change ups here and there for more interest and you've got a nice tune as all the melodies are nicely in key.... keep at it.
     
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  4. djlfusion

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    i dont see it as been harsh m8. i see it as constructive critisism. end of the day this is why i want feedback. so thanx for ur feedback!!!
     
  5. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    yeh as thin king sed, the beat actually sounds pretty good once everythings come together. the kik an snare are a lot more distinctive thn last time. but the hats sound odd at the start, just have them hit every 8th or 16th of a bar an keep them steady flowin. you jus need to add a bit of clarity to the mix, makin the drums sound like they are from the same kit. keep goin mane nice wrk