The intro shakers/hats don't really work being broken up like that - keep them more flowing - not bad work on the drums sound pretty fat....it needs a proper first drop as it more kinda just starts rather than builds to it - maybe try a break down around the minute mark - alot of tunes do this or have a build. Also I think you have some kind of limiter on the master as every few bars a snare comes through much louder than any other - limiting or any input on the master is risky business unless you really know what your doing like a sound engineer. Not meaning to be harsh matey just a few pointers to consider - a few change ups here and there for more interest and you've got a nice tune as all the melodies are nicely in key.... keep at it.
yeh as thin king sed, the beat actually sounds pretty good once everythings come together. the kik an snare are a lot more distinctive thn last time. but the hats sound odd at the start, just have them hit every 8th or 16th of a bar an keep them steady flowin. you jus need to add a bit of clarity to the mix, makin the drums sound like they are from the same kit. keep goin mane nice wrk