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[boygo]

Hi. I started something and I'm not sure if this "lfo synth" fit in the whole track (especcialy with that piano sample in the background).

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Ffabgeeb%2Fxxx

Sounds ok or not? What do you think?

 

[boygo]

F5
anybody :c ?

 

[Liquid State]

It sounds nice bro !!

 

[Cold Quake]

Everything is nice. That wobbling in the background is kinda strange imho. But if you like it, just leave it.

 

[oceantide]

I like it, this wobbly thing combined with jazzy vibe sounds a little weird, but this is what makes it cool imo ) What were you using btw?

 

[Pyrococcus]

Things are not really in tune, but at this stage it's no problem yet / could come across as atmosphere.
The question "does it fit in the whole track" will arise with further instruments... (17 seconds are not the whole track)

 

[boygo]

Thanks for feedback guys. I really appreciate your answers.
Track has been changed a little bit. I threw away that piano sample (I think I'll make some breakbeat with this).

Here you are:

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Ffabgeeb%2Fxxx-2

What's your opinion about this? Personally I think I'm going the right way (lol).

Things are not really in tune, but at this stage it's no problem yet / could come across as atmosphere.
The question "does it fit in the whole track" will arise with further instruments... (17 seconds are not the whole track)

Yes you're right. I also think that the instruments are not in tune but I'll try to change it :p.

I like it, this wobbly thing combined with jazzy vibe sounds a little weird, but this is what makes it cool imo ) What were you using btw?

You mean that LFO sound? I used Massive with some simple setup.