Okay, so I like the basic concept of the song. Appropriate structure, and nice piano arps. But as you said, there are a couple of things to consider:
Firstly, I feel like the levels of the drums need some adjustment, as they are being slightly drowned by the sub bass, and a bit to quiet in the intro. Furthermore, I would apply a bit more sidechaining here and there, especially on the bass. While the track is very liquid and has an overall very positive and uplifting feeling to it, I would try and add another bassline, containing more high frequencies, which supports the melody of what I would name a sub bass, and fills out the mids of the tune a bit more.
Hope that helped, Josh
