M8 ur bass is too loud and ur drums too quiet, thats it... what DAW are you using? Put ur drums to MAX -0 db with nothing else playing then put the volume up on everything else around them, and be very careful when putting the bass up. people dance to the drums not the bass they need to be the most prominant feature all in all.
Also the sample doesnt work for me (the one before the drop) the first clip would be much better before the drop.