Drum & Bass Liquid drum and bass - feedback appreciated

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MentalFrame, Mar 19, 2016.

  1. MentalFrame

    MentalFrame Member

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    This is my latest track, hope to get some advice.

    Thanks!
     
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  2. maschinistom

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    nice tune, sound different than most of the stuff in this forum .. good!
    i feel some of the melody tones don;t harmonise, maybe you look into that.
    also, the mid range wobble chords (although your have some nice variations) don't match sometimes.
    other than that, nice track! (y)

    i look forward to some feedback from you to my tracks, thx.
     
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  3. MentalFrame

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    Thanks mate! Will have a look on that. Didn't notice by now.

    Of course!
     
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    Has potential bro, sounds pretty chilled. On my headphones it sounds a bit flat and mono tho, it's not so full. Apply some better mastering or mid side EQ for better results. The wobble can be a bit loud compared to the rest imo. Furthermore what maschinistom said!
     
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    just had a listen again .. I especially mean the melody starting at 2'05. feels like not matching the song at all, maybe you simply change the sound to a pad.
    i agree to battletek, soundwise it can be improved, but i'm no expert on that, i'd suggest EQing different layers to get more space in the master mix ..
    anyway, this track is rolling nice and has potential to be a great tune ... carry on!