VVIIBBEESS!! That vocal sample w. delay n all is great! n your atmospherics in your intro are sick.. and that roll into the drop. YES. that warping bass is sick. Great stuff
for your intro, consider cutting out the kick snare and just going with a simple hi hat pattern instead, then bring in your k/s @ 0:24.
and mayyyybe bring down your 80-150hz on your bass just a biiiiiiiit (like 1 or 2 db) and see if you like it. am 100% NOT sold on my own advice here, haha.
That's about it, rest of this is primo! great mellow energy vibes