Liquid Dnb - Through day

[risakczex]

Hi there is LyRyck
please listen to my new Liquid Drum and bass tell me what is wrong and what to do it to be better

https://soundcloud.com/ryky-hamrozi%2Flyryck-through-day-full

thanks
LyRyck

 

[Psychoholic]

Awesome vocal work man cool track in general, I'd say the snare is layered quite a bit? It sounds a bit to noisy in my opinion.

 

[risakczex]

Awesome vocal work man cool track in general, I'd say the snare is layered quite a bit? It sounds a bit to noisy in my opinion.

Thanks Man! )
yea the snares is like a claps and noisy... i try to repair it