DnB [Liquid] DirectLine - WindPath

[DirectLine]

Hi ho !
Second song I post here !
I wanted to try some more liquid(ish) kind of sound, still DnB though.
What do you think ?

Update:

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdirectline%2Fwindpath-rework

I reuploaded a new version.

Cheers

 

[DirectLine]

I know i'm no superhuman but ... no one ?

 

[cele]

I like the melodic bits you've going on but you can barely make out the drums or the bass, it sounds more like an ambient bit with a bit of drums in the background, but i am no pro or anything myself so take this with a grain of salt, maybe try to eq and filter out unneccessary frequencys of each sound to clean the mixdown up a bit

 

[DirectLine]

Oh thanks for the review, it's really helpful for me.
I reuploaded a new, edited, version with the drums pushed a bit. And I also EQed the others tracks to get rid of unneccessary frequencys.
Here the reworked version :

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdirectline%2Fwindpath-rework