Drum & Bass [Liquid] DirectLine - WindPath

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DirectLine, Aug 21, 2013.

  1. DirectLine

    DirectLine New Member

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    Hi ho !
    Second song I post here :) !
    I wanted to try some more liquid(ish) kind of sound, still DnB though.
    What do you think ?

    Update:

    I reuploaded a new version.

    Cheers
     
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    I know i'm no superhuman but ... no one ?
     
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    I like the melodic bits you've going on but you can barely make out the drums or the bass, it sounds more like an ambient bit with a bit of drums in the background, but i am no pro or anything myself so take this with a grain of salt, maybe try to eq and filter out unneccessary frequencys of each sound to clean the mixdown up a bit
     
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    Oh thanks for the review, it's really helpful for me.
    I reuploaded a new, edited, version with the drums pushed a bit. And I also EQed the others tracks to get rid of unneccessary frequencys.
    Here the reworked version :