LIQUID/DANCEFLOOR TRACK UNTITLED

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Iv been workin on this for about 4 hours n im reali starting to get into it, its not often i make anything over than jump up but iv probz enjoyed makin it more than any other trak iv dun b4. i will be puttin some vocals to it (when i can finds sum) n its by no means finishd so baring this in mind giv it a listen n let me no wot u all think plz. will be much appreciated! (By the way Turn up ur system and sub if uv got one!)

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Lucidproduction

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nice man, the beat on the intro kinda makes me think "great drum and bass swindle"

the keys are a bit bate when they come in i just think they shud be a bit softer maybe cut out the mid eqs and add sum verb and it will sit nicer in the mix,

other than that good work mate nice stuff
 

msmith222

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sounds pretty solid (sorry, laptop speaker review), could use a bit more variety/sequencing in the drums. vocals could put this over the top! bass sounds good (again, i will check on my system later). nice track, keep it going!
 

Protoplasym

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mmmmm.... sounds big to me!


The bass is jammin and the mid range layer on top of the bass is cool.

I'm sorry (don't mean to sound like a dickface), but that piano = fail. I'd replace it with something else pronto.

Cool, dark track... minus the piano.
 

subprime

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I can nearly hear where you're going with the piano melody line (I think.....) but truth, the patch is rotten. A more techy synth sound might work, and back in the mix a bit. And a bit less repetitive?
Also true about the kick being squashed by all around it.
But sounds good man. Lots of nice bits.
 
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i see wer ur both coming from with the piano. i Was goin for a more liquid track than a techy one. but takin it abit techy sounds interesting.. ile have a play around n see wot i cum up with! thanks for the advice! oh n Protoplasym u dont sound like a dik face, constructive critism is fine with me.. better that than sum1 listen n not comment at all! feedback from evry1 so far has been much appreciated!!! wot do peeps think bout me puttin vocals over it? yes/no? im undecided.
 
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