Not bad, some nasty sounds but it feels to me like it never really drops.. and around 0:45 and 1:35 it sounds for a small moment like the drums are out of synchronisation, I'm not sure?
But there are lots of good idea's in this track, big up!
yeh man is a good start but like kibon said, feels like it never really drops. is a bit too stoppy an starty for my liking, but maybe thts what you were goin for. all your elements sound deep tho man, bass is nice an fat and your drums are full an crisp. i just think you need to add a bit of tension with some crazy frequency changes or something and then keep the beat goin constant fo a bit. nice work tho mate love ya grittyness