Drum & Bass Latest tune. Deep liquid/atmospheric vibe. Feedback welcome

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  1. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    Finished my latest tune. Title explains all really. Quite happy with the way this one turned out. would love to hear what you guys think. will return any feedback if you want! Enjoy....

     
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    anyone? will return the favour!
     
  3. wingz

    wingz everyones fav austrian

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    really liking it, can't give much feedback as i'm a fucking n00b in producing, sorry :(
     
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    glad you like it. im happy with that answer haha
     
  5. Matt&Laurenz

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    Nice and ambient , especially that intro is awesome
     
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    cheers man. appreciate the kind words. was going for ambient so thats good to hear!
     
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    Nice tune fella! Drums could use something else maybe? But that was a pointless comment cause I really don't know what to suggest!
     
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    nah man your right the drums are a bit bland i think. i tried switching them up for ages but it completely changed the vibe of the tune. so in the end i said fuck it and left them as they are. cheers for the comment tho man!
     
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    nice intro, tune has a sweet vibe. snare sounds a bit tiny for my taste, i would give it a bit more snap (sidechaining with the pads n stuff?). vocal could be a bit louder. overall i like it, could use some more eqing maybe.

    cheers!
     
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    cheers man. the snare is a bit weak in the mix your right. will yake the eq and sidechain tips on board too. nice one man!
     
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    I reckon layer that snare with a clap and tweak the transient shaping, should be nice when youve had a mess about. Other than that really nice track bud:)

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    a claps a good shout actually. might give it a yry. glad you like it though!
     
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    anyone else fancy a listen?
     
  14. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    I fuckin love that intro, those deep subdued vocals work a treat. And the string / pad work is beautiful! Drums are the only thing that let this track down.
     
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    nice one mate. i was very lazy with the drums. lost all inspiration with them. glad you like the rest of it tho!