Lasbike - What Again

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Lasbike, Aug 19, 2010.

  1. Lasbike

    Lasbike Member

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    Hi there,

    I've made this track yesterday and i wonder what you think about it, if you can give me some advices and feedbacks :)




    Thank you :)
     
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  2. Goosey_J

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    Well I'm not a producer but from listening to it I can tell you right now you need to increase the presence of the drums in the mix down. The main melody sounds wicked, but it literally overpowers everything else in the mix, including the bass sound but more worryingly the drums. The drums in general just seem a bit weak compared to the rest of the tune. The melody would lend itself to absolutely stomping percussion.

    Hopefully this helps.
     
  3. Lasbike

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    All right thank you :)

    What about now ?
     
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  4. luciduk

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    nice build up man... sounded intense but maybe needs a little more. anyway... what kind of thing are u going for with this track? not feeling the main riff personally its too simple and kinda boring, but over all the tune is alright yeh
     
  5. Lasbike

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    Thanks for your time and feedback, luciduk :)

    What do you mean ? (i'm french srry)
     
  6. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    just wondering what style you are going for?? jump up or dancefloor kinda style?
     
  7. Lasbike

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    Hmm i don't really know yet...I'm still trying to find what i'll do.( I've been producing for only 2 months). I love both styles, tho :)