Lasbike - Mind Invasion

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  1. Lasbike

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  2. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Synth sounds are good, that snare could be a little bit more crispy, maybe layer it with a higher crispier snare or clap?
     
  3. Lasbike

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    Hmmm maybe, i'll try this.

    Thank you for your feedback ! :)
     
  4. Lasbike

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    Like the meldoy part, synts are good indeed, but try adding some suffle to beat mby?
     
  6. Lasbike

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    What do you mean by "adding some suffle to beat" ? (i'm french, sorry :) )
     
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    Think he means shuffle. Some more ch ch chch ch on the hihats/cymbals/off beat snares etc
     
  8. Lasbike

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    All right, i get it. Thank you to you both.
     
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    Hey!
    Ok here i go:
    Smooth Wave - Drums are weak need a bit compression and maybe layer one punchy snare on it. Melodies are really good, but this song nieeds maybe little more low end? its too airy in my opinion :D. Overall good track ,but pain to listen with those drums.

    Mind Invasion - Like i told you Mind Invasion is good. But it needs a bit crunchier drum kit (snare is too splashy) .

    Overall keep up the good work, good to listen your tracks :)
     
  10. Stiffer

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    yeah the synth work aint bad the beat just lacks alot, there aint much top end, the snare is weak,there are no ghost hits to add shuffle

    but keep going its a learnin curve
     
  11. Lasbike

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    Okay, so the main problem is the beat pattern. It's not really a surprise, since i spend like 50 seconds on the beat pattern :) I should spent more time on it, but i don't really know how to do it.

    Thank you for your feedbacks :)
     
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    almost works, the big pitch bend gets a bit much after a little while, needs to do a bit more than just slowly warp upwards, and your precussion needs lots more impact, but the sound is pretty good, keep at it!
     
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