Lasbike - Happy Man

[Lasbike]

Hi there,

I started to produce this track (with fruityloops) yesterday and i'm kinda excited about it. It's kind of a subfocus/dancefloor dnb track.

Can you tell me what do you think ? And maybe give me some advices Thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/lasbike%2Fhappy-man

 

[Cat Gas]

Yup sounds ok to me. the snare gets a little grating after a while, you might want to add some really subtle change to it's balance or add a ghost snare every 4 bars or something to make it different. Actually on that note the whole tune gets a little dull, it needs some more depth to it definitely. Otherwise its good, it has a good intro and a good structure

 

[Shadeslayer]

You use pretty much the same progression throughout the whole track. Could use some work composition-wise. Melodical or instrumental variety, I mean.
Other than that, decent enough in my opinion.

~Shades out.

 

[Lasbike]

All right, thanks to both of you