Lasbike - Happy Man

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Lasbike, Aug 21, 2010.

  1. Lasbike

    Lasbike Member

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    Hi there,

    I started to produce this track (with fruityloops) yesterday and i'm kinda excited about it. It's kind of a subfocus/dancefloor dnb track.

    Can you tell me what do you think ? And maybe give me some advices :) Thanks.

     
  2. Cat Gas

    Cat Gas Aka Basis

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    Yup sounds ok to me. the snare gets a little grating after a while, you might want to add some really subtle change to it's balance or add a ghost snare every 4 bars or something to make it different. Actually on that note the whole tune gets a little dull, it needs some more depth to it definitely. Otherwise its good, it has a good intro and a good structure :D
     
  3. Shadeslayer

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    You use pretty much the same progression throughout the whole track. Could use some work composition-wise. Melodical or instrumental variety, I mean.
    Other than that, decent enough in my opinion.

    ~Shades out.
     
  4. Lasbike

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    All right, thanks to both of you :)