Lasbike - Deep Skies

[Lasbike]

Hi guys,

I've been using FL studio for 10 days, i'm kinda new to this.

I've made this track, called it "Deep Skies"..Some kind of liquid drum and bass.

Can you tell me what you think about it ?

Thank you.

Here is the link :

http://soundcloud.com/lasbike/lasbike-deep-skies-12

 

[Cat Gas]

Impressive if you've only been using it for 10 days. There's nothing really after the drop, and no bassline (that I could hear anyway,) maybe if you include less elements before the drop, then do it from there. I liked the sort of mini breakdown, but maybe use an fx riser or something instead of another kick rush? Otherwise for 10 days, thats impressive.

 

[Lasbike]

Hi Roadrunner21, thank you for your feedback.

There is, in fact, a bassline, but it's not loud enough.

By the way, what's an "FX riser" ?

PS : Yeah, i've been using FL for about 2 weeks, but something like 8 hours a day.. And i've played music (guitar/piano) for 10 years, and listened to dnb for 3 years, that may explain

 

[Cat Gas]

FX riser like white noise with a filter which is automated so it rises up, or you could use a reverse hi hat, anything which could be used as a riser really