nice melody mate! drums could do with being sharper imo, theyr not too solid at the moment particuly the snare. i would turn ur hi hats up as well. umm and maybe that lead synth that hits every 16th could do with filtering to fade it in and out or something, seems very persistant. Think it would be a good tune if the drums were a bit stronger
Yeah the drums need a lot of more work and effort.
The buildup is pretty cool, maybe add some crash cymbal hit or something on the first bar from the drop to give it some more depth.
Try more effects such as reverb, delay, lowpass, highpass and bandpass but use them very subtle, then modulate and automate the settings of the FX's to give it more feeling and movement.
That'll give your track a bit more 'flow', but after all, it's already pretty good, except for the drum sounds.