Lasbike - Breakdown

[Lasbike]

Hi there

So, i've made this track last week. I worked on it for about 15 hours, and i wonder what you think about it, and if you can share some tricks and tips.

Thank you.

Here is the link : http://soundcloud.com/lasbike/breakdown

 

[miszt]

mixdown needs work, although the overall levels are ok on the whole, the mix is very muddy (need more careful eq, compression and levels), and apart from the your snare and kick, the precussion is getting lost in the mix. also needs sum variation, that synth gets really annoying by the time the track is half way thru, looses all its impact, drop that synth out for a while and play with some other ideas, then you can ramp it up thru the breakdown and have an emmense drop.....but not a bad effort tho, keep at it

 

[Lasbike]

Hmmm..All right, thank you for your feedback

Any other ?

 

[Mr Fletch]

I'd have to agree, mix needs work, everything sounds muddy and "congested" like all the elements of your track are fighting for space on the frequency range.

You got good ideas in there, just need to iron them out and control them a little better thats all.