lahniz - what do you think about my shit? ;)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by lahniz, Jan 12, 2011.

  1. lahniz

    lahniz New Member

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    There's some of my newer tunes. Two new drum&bass songs and few more psychedelic stuff. If you have opinions to make my tunes sound better i would be really glad ;)

    -lahniz

    http://www.mikseri.net/lahniz
     
  2. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    mountains of madness:
    Intro vocal is very unsettling.. darkness.. I like! :)
    shame the drums fade in... its not very nice..

    mix sounds good- but- drums sound overcompressed/clipping? sounds like sonic static almost..

    bass could be more interesting.. the underlying rythmn is a bit simple- but can see where you are coming from with it..

    atmospherics in this tune are top notch :)
    shame the drums arrangement let it down a bit.

    Keep at it man!
     
  3. lahniz

    lahniz New Member

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    Thanks alot for your feedback! That song was my third finished drum&bass song ever so there is still alot to learn from that genre. I'll try to polish the drum sounds more in my next release. I have this problem that my wife doesn't allow me to play my music from the monitors when she's at home so my mixing is usually not the best sounding because i have to do it with my headphones. ;)
     
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    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    if you can- buy flat response headphones!

    mix on cans, mix again on monitors when the wife is out, then master on monitors, double check on cans ;)

    works for me :D
     
  5. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    When you learn to respect your own music, I'll take a listen. I'm not wasting my time listening to something that's been called, "shit" by the bloody composer himself.


    grow up a little bit, yeah
     
  6. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    "shit" has been used as a slang word for stuff since the early 90's atleast, i think you misunderstood what he was saying :)

    tunes not bad mate i like the break uses!! use soundcloud tho :p
     
  7. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    I remember using it a lot myself when I was a teenager.


    ; )
     
  8. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    just listening again now. your shits pretty good actually :)
     
  9. lahniz

    lahniz New Member

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    i'm 31 years old and that was maybe the first time to use a word shit in forums