KRSPY - incoming attack (drumstep)

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  1. Krispy

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    Check it out,
    Feedback appreciated
     
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    I really like the clean buildup/intro. Wow it got heavy at the drop. :) The mixing and everything sounded good—very crisp. The only thing is I couldn't quite make out what they were saying in the vocal samples; of course, that's not all the important... The only substantive critique I might have is the melody (such as it is) could maybe have a bit more going on; especially at the end of a long phrase or section, it might be fun to take a note, chop it in half, and move the second half up. Or, you know, whatever you do to spice up the sense of movement in the melody. I still am a little jealous of how clear and clean it all sounds, especially considering all the bass you've got in it.
     
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    Thanks very much for the comment
    It's hard to think of those types of things while making the song but it makes perfect sense.
     
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    very Krispy sound:)good work
     
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    Drums definitely could use a lot more weight, they just don't have the impact you want in genres like that.
    Nice track regardless! :)
     
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    Agree about the drums, maybe it's just they need to be louder and turn the other channels down a bit (or if not already doing so parallel compression and a small drumverb imo). I couldn't hear the vocal/quote very well, needs to come up a bit. Like the bass, really quite liked the drop, different and not what i expected :D
     
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    Very interesting comments
    Yeah I figured the vocal wasn't clear enough but had no idea about the drums
    Thank you very much everyone :)
     
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    I just think super loud drums (maybe a bit too loud for my taste.) really fit with that genre.
    Still saying the rest is great :).