KRISPY - BLACK ARTS (dark drum and bass)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Krispy, Dec 30, 2010.

  1. Krispy

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    Hey everyone just finished this new tune and looking for some feedback. It's got kind of a dark feeling to it and tried to do some different angles on the drums.

    Let me know what you think, thanks!

    KRISPY - BLACK ARTS
     
  2. thin king

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    that kick is mint but the snare is abit weak it needs more of tail and to hit a bit lower - the spacing of the mid bass is a bit random if listening on headphones - overall not bad but seems to lack punch and brightness
     
  3. Krispy

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    interesting, thanks for the input
    you've given me some things to think about and work on
    im gonna try to fix up the snares and fix the stereo spread on that bass a bit
     
  4. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    nice track, sum very kool stuff going on, cant give much production feedback coz i'm on the shittest speakers in the history of audiophilia, even spor sounds like a duck getting buggered in a snow storm. think the snare probly is a little to weak, love the messed up sounds, good shit
     
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    Kick is heavey, snare is weak sounds very weird togheter. Hihat patterns are boring. Bass is sounding good:) I think it needs some more elemts in it, gets boring and i dont like the flow very much sounds like random starting and stopping, maybe just my taste. Good job on the bass tho:)
     
  6. Krispy

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    Thanks for the input
    I was thinking myself that it needed some more elements in it but im not sure what
    maybe a pad or something
     
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    nice stuff....would defo like to confirm the need to rethink/do snare....lacking some(a lot if i m honest) punch, all the more evident cos ur kick is sooo good!!!

    good job so far!!!:)
     
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    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    PROD sounds tight as can be... I'm loving the KD&SD!! The off pattern drums are very interesting. I can't fault anything... the track doesn't really drive me anywhere, but from a technical standpoint, this is a masterpiece. Very Edgey, very Techy.

    Sounds amazing on my Logitech Comp speaks!


    :rockon: