producing for around 3 months! give me feedback and help me improve! (going to be adding more pads, FX and things like that, this is just an hour thing i put together.! )
You could definitely make something out of that. As you have stated above this is only a 30 second clip and hence not that much to give feedback for. What I can say is you should try make your drums blend in better with the tune. They really stick out quite a bit. Find a good compressor and most importantly good samples. Also, layer your drums with an existing break loop. This is optional but if you are looking for more drive and not sure how to achieve that, this is the way to go.
The melody is nice and overall I think it's a good job since you're just producing for 3 month.
P.S.: I can't think of any reason to ever disable a yoi channel