Kinda different track, "Dubstep" experimental

[Mind Fight]

This is one of my newer projects. I know it's far from perfect so I was wondering if you guys could give some feedback.

Don't know if it's actually dubstep. But it's experimental for sure.

Have a listen and tell me what you think:

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fcruel-insanity%2Fnot-enough-scissors-2

 

[krease]

gunna be honest here i dont really like the nintendo type sounds going on - id say its defo got a dubstep beat but depending on what your going for it needs some fx on the drums and maybe more crisp / clean sounding samples!

 

[Mind Fight]

Thanks for the advice mate!

 

[ApeCat]

I for one am feeling the Gameboy vibes but I think your tune needs work, the drums definitely and the synths and things could do with some subtle variation, thinking especially of the bass'y stabs around 0:40 and the fact that the same elements and phrases repeat themselves throughout the track, like you've got two or three different "parts" and you're just rearranging them without bringing in anything new, exciting and surprising. Don't think the bass is coming through enough in the mix.