Kill joy - Gut Wound (WIP)

[Phat_Sam]

Ok... I decided it was time for some serious filth a la jump up styleeee

Not sure if quite made it as filthy as I would have liked but still... it's a WIP

What you 'orrible lot recon?

https://soundcloud.com/thekilljoy%2Fgut-wound-wip

 

[MARKLAR]

sounds sick mate
id get rid of that big drone u got goin on tho kinda takes away alot from the bass on the drop
drums are sounding really nice aswell mate
good start

 

[Jwood27]

yeah i agree with marlok, the drop seems to lack, and that mid noise you have could do with being pronounced more. i think the ideas really really good, and with some tweaking this could be awesome

 

[Mr Fletch]

Bangin track mate, got loadsa potential. Agree with Marlok tho about the long droning bass. But apart from that....great track!

 

[Phat_Sam]

Sweet! Cheers lads! Yeah. Still got some mixdown issues but hopefully I'll get them sorted! Any more comments my his appreciated!

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Wait... You mean the drone that carries on from the intro?

 

[miszt]

ooo thats a nice bass! agree on the drone, also i recon u shuld cut sum of the hats/shakers/rides in the first 16/32bars then bring them in again, so it hits hard, nice tho anyways, culd b fatt, the little break inbetween the sections feels like maybe its coming in wrong, as if its the first half of a break bar rather than the last so it rolls in?

 

[Phat_Sam]

ooo thats a nice bass! agree on the drone, also i recon u shuld cut sum of the hats/shakers/rides in the first 16/32bars then bring them in again, so it hits hard, nice tho anyways, culd b fatt, the little break inbetween the sections feels like maybe its coming in wrong, as if its the first half of a break bar rather than the last so it rolls in?

Yeah. Thats another problem Ive been trying to handle. And yeah. Gonna make it a bit more interesting. Just testing the waters with the bassline. Making sure it wasn't cack. Hah

 

[mr meh]

Banging track

but the drop def needs more impact

 

[Phat_Sam]

Banging track

but the drop def needs more impact

Cheers geeza.

Yeah... will try and up a newer version today if I can!

 

[DJ Noobe]

Banging track

but the drop def needs more impact

I agree with that ! You can work on the drop a little bit more, but don't try to change too much things, sometimes it's change all of your tune !

 

[Phat_Sam]

I agree with that ! You can work on the drop a little bit more, but don't try to change too much things, sometimes it's change all of your tune !

Yeah that's what I'm worried about! Nice one bruvva!

 

[DJ Noobe]

I think when you have finish a track, begin an other...
It's too bad to stay on on a track and rework & rework...

Make a new and get back to your oldies when you have serious things to change

 

[Phat_Sam]

I think when you have finish a track, begin an other...
It's too bad to stay on on a track and rework & rework...

Make a new and get back to your oldies when you have serious things to change

Yeah... gonna finish this one a bit more and then crack on with the hundreds of others that I've started and not finished!

 

[DJ Noobe]

Yeah... gonna finish this one a bit more and then crack on with the hundreds of others that I've started and not finished!

hehehe !

 

[Phat_Sam]

OK! Switched it about a little bit. Any more crit before I bang this one out?

https://soundcloud.com/thekilljoy%2Fgut-wound-wip