Kill joy - Gut Wound (WIP)

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  1. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    Ok... I decided it was time for some serious filth a la jump up styleeee

    Not sure if quite made it as filthy as I would have liked but still... it's a WIP

    What you 'orrible lot recon?

     
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  2. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    sounds sick mate
    id get rid of that big drone u got goin on tho kinda takes away alot from the bass on the drop
    drums are sounding really nice aswell mate
    good start
     
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    Jwood27 VICTIM

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    yeah i agree with marlok, the drop seems to lack, and that mid noise you have could do with being pronounced more. i think the ideas really really good, and with some tweaking this could be awesome
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Bangin track mate, got loadsa potential. Agree with Marlok tho about the long droning bass. But apart from that....great track!
     
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    Sweet! Cheers lads! Yeah. Still got some mixdown issues but hopefully I'll get them sorted! Any more comments my his appreciated!

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    Wait... You mean the drone that carries on from the intro?
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    ooo thats a nice bass! agree on the drone, also i recon u shuld cut sum of the hats/shakers/rides in the first 16/32bars then bring them in again, so it hits hard, nice tho anyways, culd b fatt, the little break inbetween the sections feels like maybe its coming in wrong, as if its the first half of a break bar rather than the last so it rolls in?
     
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    Yeah. Thats another problem Ive been trying to handle. And yeah. Gonna make it a bit more interesting. Just testing the waters with the bassline. Making sure it wasn't cack. Hah
     
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    Banging track

    but the drop def needs more impact
     
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    Cheers geeza.

    Yeah... will try and up a newer version today if I can!
     
  10. DJ Noobe

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    I agree with that ! You can work on the drop a little bit more, but don't try to change too much things, sometimes it's change all of your tune !
     
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    Yeah that's what I'm worried about! Nice one bruvva!
     
  12. DJ Noobe

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    I think when you have finish a track, begin an other...
    It's too bad to stay on on a track and rework & rework...

    Make a new and get back to your oldies when you have serious things to change ;)
     
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    Yeah... gonna finish this one a bit more and then crack on with the hundreds of others that I've started and not finished!
     
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    hehehe ! ;)
     
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    OK! Switched it about a little bit. Any more crit before I bang this one out?

     
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