So after listening to the original version a few times I decided that I liked the tune but absolutely hated the mixdown, so I had a go at re-building it from scratch. Here it is: & here is the original version for anyone who wishes to compare: All critiques are welcome, be sure to let me know if there's anything that I was doing better in the original version P.S. The original was mastered professionally but the VIP has got my own master chain.