Drum & Bass Kefentse - Move (WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Kefentse, Jan 8, 2012.

  1. Kefentse

    Kefentse New Member

    Joined:
    Jan 8, 2012
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0


    It's my first attempt at Drum and Bass. I'd like this to get something you NEED to move your feet on, and I'm not sure what's missing.
    Any feedback? Tips? Anything is welcome really, I'd like to improve.

    -Kefentse
     
    Last edited: Jan 8, 2012
  2. Kefentse

    Kefentse New Member

    Joined:
    Jan 8, 2012
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
    Made a second version, I like this one better. I'll be working on this one from now of on. Feedback is always appreciated..

     
    Last edited: Jan 8, 2012
  3. Kefentse

    Kefentse New Member

    Joined:
    Jan 8, 2012
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
  4. neddez

    neddez Member

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2008
    Messages:
    589
    Likes Received:
    9
    Location:
    London/Southampton
    quackstep

    why not go and make 10-20 more tunes and then start asking for feedback?
     
  5. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    Thats a little harsh isnt it? Why dont you go and think of something constructive to say then come back?

    Anyway, onto the track, it's very....very basic right now, that bass needs a hell of alot of work, learn how to automate filters / EQ / structure a track. There's plenty of tutorials floating around here and youtube mate
     
  6. neddez

    neddez Member

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2008
    Messages:
    589
    Likes Received:
    9
    Location:
    London/Southampton
    ..yeah maybe

    i just feel that it being his first track, the dude is probably gonna learn more through experience/experimentation than from getting advice off of a bunch of wannabe producers (me being the worst) on a forum

    OP, keep at it and your 2nd track will be 3x better than this
     
  7. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    I totally understand where you're coming from, but IMO this is the best way to better yourself as a producer. As long as you can take a hit of harsh criticism, if said criticism is constructive, it really does make you better yourself. I know this first hand, when I first came here my production skills were practically non existent, and thanks to the people on here, I have learnt alot, and come along way!
     
  8. Kefentse

    Kefentse New Member

    Joined:
    Jan 8, 2012
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    0
    Very basic indeed, although I'm not aiming for a complicated song, simply a happy bouncing one. But you're right there's ALOT for me to learn :D.

    Thanks. I'll look into them!