Kate Lesing - Rivers of avalon (DRW Remix)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Stickyfingerz89, Apr 8, 2009.

  1. Stickyfingerz89

    Stickyfingerz89 New Member

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    Hello all,

    i'm quite new to producing DnB, this is my 5th track i made and I kinda like it myself.
    It's a 172 bpm liquid-ish track with some royalty-free samples on top :).
    The kick/snare can either sound too loud or too soft, cause i made this track entirely on my headphones.
    Tell me what you think about it!
    Cheerz

    http://www.sendspace.com/file/2o9zvd
     
  2. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    the ideas are there man not a bad attempt an since its your 5th tune i can expect u are still learning everything. The vocal is a bit out of key with wat u got goin on, your drums need more work, an so does the bass the synth sounds a bit cheap but these are all things that u will learn as u progress, rememebr dont get attached to your tunes theres always time to go bak once u learnt everything. just keep makin tunes ull learn alot from each 1 u make. Keep at it, i like this style, peace!
     
  3. subprime

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    Mate, I can see why you're happy it's a pretty nice tune. Others might have some points to improve on but I enjoyed it.
    Peace.
     
  4. Stickyfingerz89

    Stickyfingerz89 New Member

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    @Sphinx, I sure have lots to learn, and your suggestions have been written down. Thx m8

    @Subprime, thx for the compliment, keeps my spirit up (y)