Kate Lesing - Rivers of avalon (DRW Remix)

[Stickyfingerz89]

Hello all,

i'm quite new to producing DnB, this is my 5th track i made and I kinda like it myself.
It's a 172 bpm liquid-ish track with some royalty-free samples on top .
The kick/snare can either sound too loud or too soft, cause i made this track entirely on my headphones.
Tell me what you think about it!
Cheerz

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2o9zvd

 

[Sammy Dexcell]

the ideas are there man not a bad attempt an since its your 5th tune i can expect u are still learning everything. The vocal is a bit out of key with wat u got goin on, your drums need more work, an so does the bass the synth sounds a bit cheap but these are all things that u will learn as u progress, rememebr dont get attached to your tunes theres always time to go bak once u learnt everything. just keep makin tunes ull learn alot from each 1 u make. Keep at it, i like this style, peace!

 

[subprime]

Mate, I can see why you're happy it's a pretty nice tune. Others might have some points to improve on but I enjoyed it.
Peace.

 

[Stickyfingerz89]

@Sphinx, I sure have lots to learn, and your suggestions have been written down. Thx m8

@Subprime, thx for the compliment, keeps my spirit up