i lied the intro. very musical but you lost me at the drop.
might just be preference.
i think if you gonna drop it into some dirty grimey shizney then you need to cut the melodic synths and lower the key with more of a break for the drop.
Nothing more to say about this piece? If you find it difficult to actually pick just one negative aspect of this track, I can understand. At least give me some advice for future projects then, please.
i like the intro and the middle too. the middle is so good you couldve done a tune based on that and it wouldve been 100 times better. the vocal chops are nice. the main synth is too high in pitch for me, id like it a lot lower. its rather dubsteppy. but if youre going for jump up youre on the right path.