Drum & Bass Karma & Klaus - Louder Humiliation (Please give feedback!)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by megagnome, Jan 23, 2012.

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What do you think?

  1. Stop producing!

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  2. Heard worse and certainly better!

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  3. This track needs some work still

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  4. Awesome! .... but.....

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  1. megagnome

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    Hi. This is my first serious attempt at Drum & Bass. Feel free to critique and don't hold back.

     
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    i lied the intro. very musical but you lost me at the drop.

    might just be preference.

    i think if you gonna drop it into some dirty grimey shizney then you need to cut the melodic synths and lower the key with more of a break for the drop.
     
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  3. megagnome

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    Thank you for the input. I will look into that.
     
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    Nothing more to say about this piece? If you find it difficult to actually pick just one negative aspect of this track, I can understand. At least give me some advice for future projects then, please.
     
    megagnome, Jan 24, 2012
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    i like the intro and the middle too. the middle is so good you couldve done a tune based on that and it wouldve been 100 times better. the vocal chops are nice. the main synth is too high in pitch for me, id like it a lot lower. its rather dubsteppy. but if youre going for jump up youre on the right path.
     
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  6. megagnome

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    Thanks man, I appreciate the input.
     
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