Just started producing a few months ago

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sweaty Teddy, Jun 15, 2009.

  1. Sweaty Teddy

    Sweaty Teddy Nob'ed

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    This is what I got so far


    Not big on sub-genres so don't really know what it will come under and some of it is quite varied.

    www.myspace.com/sweatyteddyproductions

    Not amazing but I try :) Constructive criticism please.
     
  2. D-Tektiv

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    Ease up on the bass in "Not A Chomp"
    "Syndrome" could possibly fit in a liquid mix in some ways. I like the piano feel in it..
    On "Chill" at the 1min38sec drop, add a deep bassline after that drop..just my opinion but after that little build up would be nice to hear some BOOM, heh.

    Couldn't really form an opinion on "Real Rock N Rolla"...
    I'm sure others on here can help ya with other aspects of the tunes...pz & keep at it!
     
  3. Sweaty Teddy

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    Thanks man appreciate the comments.

    Know what you mean about the bass on "not a chomp" will have to sort it out and will try do something about "chill" aswell.
     
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    Yeah, just turn down the gain a bit on the eq for the bass for "Not A Chomp"..
    No prob on the words bro. pz
     
  5. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    all your tunes sound nice already for just producing for a few months.. it seems like you have a lot inspiration.. I really like syndrome! personally I didn't really like the bass in "chill". don't really know what to say about the other ones but keep up the good work !
     
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    Thanks Syndrome is definatly my fave track out of what I have made.

    Need to change "chill" quite alot it's too boring.
     
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    Not a Chomps not really my kind of DnB, I liked syndrome a ot, there is more potential in. You could add some high pitched melody to finish it. Got some talent in a few years we'll producing over the top!