lovely, really nice intro. i think the drums could come up a bit in the mix, maybe some more percussion and fills here and there. they sound like there's not much high end either. might just be me. i was a little surprised when it dropped, i was expecting a neuro funk style to come in.
nice and atmospheric, a little more musically distinguished than a lot of dnb too...love the intro. reakon it needs to build a little more and have a real "drop" . i personally think you should lose the darker piano riffs and whatnot and keep it melodic, really work on some driving drums and get a nice big bassline in there. just my 2 cents though...