sounds real phat and nice! just maybe less of the reverb sounding like a metal room and more like a stadium or something, perhaps if u want the vocal to be a subtle layer and not a lead then u could stereo expand/spread it and then use more of a wide frequency that high passed just my ideas, sounds sick though!
Nice driving feeling. The middle part, from about :47 to 1:07 (the breakdown?), seemed like the meat of the track, but it was also the shortest. For my personal taste, I might consider adding more to the beginning/ending sections to make them feel more solidly the main part of the song; otherwise I guess I might expand the breakdown to make it a substantial part of the song. I did like the drum groove, and the turnaround at about :24.
thanks man, ill definitely work on that stuff later this is just an idea ..i think.. which through time expanded into something but nevertheless thanks for the suggestions they are always really helpfull