Juno - Back in [dark roller]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by lewis797, Oct 6, 2013.

  1. lewis797

    lewis797 Member

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    Heres a new dnb track that iv been working on, went for quite a dark rolling vibe with it! Any feedback / advise would be awesome :)



    Thanks
     
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    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    wicked move, love those high pitched kind of dub pluck things. bass i weighty too. love the way the bass progresses too. only critique would be that the second drop could have more of build up in to it?
     
  3. Menosance

    Menosance aka OSOI

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    Love the intro. Good build up. Nice vibe I must say. Although I would make the transition from a section to the talking bass sections much more smoother, but other than that great track Juno :)
     
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    Quality tune man! Good job on the stereo effects, it really makes the tune what it is. Maybe make some more 'obvious' changes to the second drop for the sake of keeping it interesting. However this is a nice piece of music!
     
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    yea cool tune
     
  6. lewis797

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    Thanks for the feedback :)
    Quite a few people have said about the second drop, any ideas where to go with it? mash up the drums a bit more? add more bits or just just completely work it?

    Thanks!