Drum & Bass Jungle tune (wip). FIrst production so feedback greatly appreciated!

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  1. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    Started making this jungle tune. looking to keep the oldschool vibe on the bass and what not. Used some samples from the blumarten pack a while back. Its just a little mess around but id be interested to know what people think and how it could improve! ps i know its a bit repetitive. safe

     
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    jimjimjim oldskool

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    first production??
    really?
    i thought it was great.
    i really enjoyed that tune.
    dont have any critisims.
    top marks m8
     
  3. lasiien

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    for a first production? really nice. Keep going ! :)
     
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    first one i feel is worth asking for feedback on. glad you guys like it! cheers for listening
     
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    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    really nice, cool atmosphere, keep it up!
     
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    safe man, apprecaiate the feedback. where i strehced it so much it went really glitchy, but i think it adds to the track a bit!
     
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    anymore feedback? ill be happy to feedback your tracks too!
     
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    nice roller mate, only thing i would say is possibly cut that sample that hits at the beginning of every 8th bar, not completly just at certain points ie after the first 32/64 of the main
    keep it up tho the sounds are pleasing to my ears (y)
     
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    ill take that on board. cheers man!
     
  10. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Really nice track, reminds me of my youth at Helter Skelter lol! Certainly maintained the old skool vibe you were going for!
     
  11. DjCartel

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    safe man! after hearing andy c dropping lots of jungle last friday i had to make my own! glad you liked it
     
  12. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    loving this man, proper oldschool like someone said :)
    all your elements sound well moulded, expected alot worst when reading first production, but im sat here loving the chilled vibes :)
     
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    Very big mate, hard to believe its your first production though! o_O

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  14. DjCartel

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    Thats really pleasing to hear man, glad your enjoying it. I didnt think many people would still like the simplicity of the short stabby sine bass but it seems its still alive. Thanks for the feedback
     
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    its the first tune ive actualy felt i could ask for feedback on. ive made a few other bits and bobs but theyre not what id deem a song haha, cheers for the feedback!
     
  16. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    very much alive man, some of the best basslines are simple imo
    btw, any chance once its done you could send it over so i can stick it on my ipod, aim is "jackevo@gmail.com"
    cheers mate
     
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    Couldnt agree more mate! when its finished i will do taht for you. thanks again