Jungle track , work in progress - Thoughts

[Breaknz]

https://soundcloud.com/dnbreaksnz/tex/s-GdEbN

 

[Yukon]

Caught you out using them friction and icicle loops
Pretty big tune if you ask me tho.

 

[spyre]

Cool, bassline could use more variation

 

[DjCartel]

sounds deep to me man, good effort so far. its not jungle though. feeling it tho

 

[Sovereign]

Yeah I'd add some variation to the bassline otherwise it sounds good and honestly there's like no snare (besides the one I heard maybe a few times at the end of sections), if there is one it's practically a hi-hat.

 

[Mason John]

This ain't jungle brah, maybe more chilled ambient trip-hop, but it sounds pretty good regardless. Like Spyre and Sovereign said, it could benefit some variation in the bassline. It could also do w/ some percussive work on a swing motion after each 2nd kick to give it some more rhythm and flavor. I like the vocal sample in there tho, even if I can't recognize the artist xD.

 

[Breaknz]

Def has no snare - aware of that one haha thanks for the feed backs , Wanted it to be just a bass heavy roller realy